Searria H.

Hiya! My name is Searria, but you can call me Sea. Welcome to the site. If it makes you feel any better, I don't consider newbies to be inexperienced. :D ...

I really enjoyed this poem. I also like how firm you are with your faith. As Chirantha has already mentioned, I would cut out some of the "Fall Away"s. Maybe ...

You have very pretty eyes. I've always wanted greenish eyes, but Mine are dark brown. The lighting was a little better in the first pic, but both are very good. ...

Zombies ate my publishing what?? :lol: Your kitten is adorable. Don't you love it when animals cooperate with the camera? I'm not sure, but you might need to blur out ...

OOO. I jumped out of the bush and jumped crazily up and down, trying to desperately make all the bugs fall off my body. While jumping, I heard someone giggle ...

Yaay! There's more! This was much less info-dumpy than the first part. Very good. I didn't find any typing errors, so that's good... You really caught me off guard by ...

I have been trying to review this all week, but school has pushed me away from doing anything fun. :? Very gripping, intriguing, and interesting start. As artistpersona has already ...

This came from a dream I had... It's okay if your really confused. This will be in the middle of a book. Enjoy The only image in my mind was ...

Once again, I'm not a poet, but I'll do the best I can. I liked the concept of the poem, and I liked the fact that it was free verse. ...

:lol: Thanks everybody. Yeah, My guinea pig used to be really fat, but now he's really sick with something, so he's really thin. He's hanging in there though!

This was depressing, but good. The beginning two lines were good. Your rhyming pattern was consistant, but weird. The first two lines of a stanza, then the last three... I ...

I loved your comparison in this poem. I would hate to be a tight-rope walker, so I can feel your narrator's fear and uncertainty. There was only one line that ...

Poor guy. He doesn't look like he's eaten in awhile. :D The shading was very good, and his facial features were very intriguing. The only suggestion I can make is ...

Umm... Is that butterfly dead or alive? If it's alive, how did you get so close? I love the turtle. It's really cute. I used to have a turtle, but ...

Very cute poem. Much more light-hearted than the previous two poems I read of yours. I agree with KookieKatie about Make-up and Ketchup. I'm not a big fan of imperfect ...